The Shirt Comments

It seems the boy is haunted by his past failure to turn a penalty kick into a goal and the pains he suffered by spectators booing.He can not overcome the harrowing experience in which his dream of becoming a star player was gone.

A wonderful poem made out of a simple concept of a shirt. Beautiful poem.

her poems are horrible

I am intrigued with this. I think I shall have to reread it several times to get exactly what is going on. But I think he feels unworthy to wear his team's shirt. I like the set-up, the story element, and the way it ends. I do want to read more by her.

very nice poem, depicts a sports person's sorrows quite well, when things are not okay...

That poor boy. We shouldn't mock the afflicted. Only 100 grand a week. No wonder he's miserable. Nice work

I found him alone! Thanks for sharing.

I don't think I have ever read a football poem before.

Alone at the bar. Nice work.