Monday, February 24, 2014

The Shiny Cloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shiny cloud
called me to swing
with the wind.
So did I!
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Neela Nath Das
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Geetha Jayakumar 25 February 2014

A beautiful fairy tale. I loved each lines...

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Vivek Tiwari 24 February 2014

The lines speak more than a fairy tale. on one hand it reminds the beauty of rainy mild clouded sky on the other hand it describes a beautiful phase of Mother Nature. love it greatly. 10/10.

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A compelling cloud of creativity. Well done my friend!

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