Thursday, December 13, 2012

The Shift Comments

Rating: 4.8

There's an undercurrent of change sweeping city and dale

a quiet awakening of old secrets buried deep,
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Kanav Justa 20 December 2012

Excellent imageryy.. Loved reading it

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 December 2012

very nice.end is optimistic. to the new awakened world, our spirits will hold fast. is really good.liked it.

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Hans Vr 14 December 2012

I am fully and 100 % with you on this. The positive energy in this world is increasing. It is a silent revolution that is going on unsen in the media. A kindness revolution is around the corner. I got this 'yes' experience reading this poem Let us work all to make this SHIFT a huge reality. Perhaps 21.12.12. is a good day to reach a sharp rise in the exponential curve of kindness Nobody and nothing can stop the shift If I had a 100 marks to give to this poem, you got them

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Hazel Durham 14 December 2012

Beautiful imagery, so well crafted. Great write!

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Connor Whyte 13 December 2012

very unique and interesting write use of a lot of imagery its like I can see it. Good work

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Owain Glyn 13 December 2012

Nicely put together, optimistic.

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