Friday, October 16, 2009

The Shell. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ivory white, and quite symmetrical,
It oozes artistry.

Hardened by time and water's frenetic
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Fay Slimm
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Stephen Stirk 16 October 2009

Fay, I love your perception and analytical approach. I also love sheshells on the sheshore. Great poem Steve

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Carol Gall 16 October 2009

lovely words fay 10....

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Ian Bowen 16 October 2009

Fay, wonderful poetry can be gleaned by staring natures beauty in the face. You have done both with accuracy and choice of word.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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