The Sheen Of Life Comments

As soft As velvet! ! Thanks for sharing.

We, not having english our native language, should study poems like that.

Hearts that break, crumble and decay, Just part of our journey along the way, Ending up at times in a heap of rubble, Love can destroy and be part of our endless troubles, ..........yes, love can destroy many troubles. Very nicely and aptly presented. A best poem I like most. Thanks for posting.

Life sees many phases like a moon but a full moon always appears on the sky every month.

A refreshing river reflecting rich realism. Well done my friend!

our true mirror of life. This poem reminds the struggles of life Wonderful sharing

Essence of the poem To discover the revealing certainty, With the constant reminder of our struggles from our past youth, We wear the heart-aching truth. Beautiful ink

Just Part Of Our Journey Along The Way.... A line so true.. yet so, so many have trouble overcoming their journey that it brings so much pain. To look at the lines on someones face this paints a picture of their life. I certainly have a few. Thank you Hazel x

Yes, the sheen of life is fleeting. Let us hope that the burns are also not permanent and will be cured in course of life. We have to accept the ambivalence of life. Enjoyed!

Hearts that break, crumble and decay, Just part of our journey along the way. Nice! Well written poem!