Monday, July 6, 2020

The Shattering Pearls Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love the pearlous
Rainy droplets
As it journey
All through the atmosphere
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Varsha M
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Srushti Dodamani 15 August 2020

The little angel drops Salvaged my fading hope Instilling life once again Heart touchy poem very expressed...

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 July 2020

Uplifting! ! New life; Able to move forward again. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 06 July 2020

Life is for a purpose to serve / Blessing every one whom I meet. - - - ? I enjoyed the message that this poem brought to the readers. I also liked the metaphor of the rain wherein one good deed multiplies into a good deed for countless observers or stander-bys. Very nice work!

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 July 2020

Clever use of metaphors to put forth your point that serving with devotion to others should be goal of life. Very nicely written and enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 July 2020

The little angel drops Salvaged my fading hope Instilling life once again That's how nature heals every parched soul. Beautifully written.🌹

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