Monday, August 31, 2020

The Shangri-La Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dreams are my frequent
Mapping heavens explicit
How I long to be there all time
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Varsha M
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2020

Dreams! ! Desires! Love and life; The quest along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 September 2020

Artitecture imbibe beyond imagination Proclivity spur like creator on invention How I long to be there all time. Dreams are my home sweet Nestling is never a quest How I long to be there all time. .....beautiful poem like the crystal fountain

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o poet me poet yeps poet 31 August 2020

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M Asim Nehal 31 August 2020

The repetition of line " How I long to be there all time." added real value to your stanzas. Nicely written 10+

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Sharad Bhatia 31 August 2020

In fact, dreams are always pleasant, Beautiful poem about " pleasurable Dreams" . Regards - 100++

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