Wednesday, August 16, 2017

The Shady Path Comments

Rating: 4.5

If your reckless mind unobserved
wanders into the deep dark sea,
then swim towards the lapping shore
and walk towards the tall oak tree
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Diana Rosser
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Jazib Kamalvi 18 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Diana. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Nidhi Agrawal 17 August 2017

Beautiful imagery. I feel there's an element of adventure and mystery here. We can walk any path if only we believe in ourselves.

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Diana Rosser 17 August 2017

Thank you Nidhi for your thoughts and for reading this poem.

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Diana Rosser 17 August 2017

Thank you Nidhi for your thoughts about this poem. I am grateful that you shared them with me.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 August 2017

Mind wanders in deep dark sea and this also wonders not finding right way sometimes. English summer day amazes mind. Finding a shady path is interesting. This is clear imagery that talks about helping self. Going in adventure with memory of God we can achieve our goal. Amazing sharing...10

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Diana Rosser 17 August 2017

Thank you Kumarmani for taking the time to read and comment on this poem.

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