The Shady Path Comments
If your reckless mind unobserved
wanders into the deep dark sea,
then swim towards the lapping shore
and walk towards the tall oak tree
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Beautiful imagery. I feel there's an element of adventure and mystery here. We can walk any path if only we believe in ourselves.
Thank you Nidhi for your thoughts about this poem. I am grateful that you shared them with me.
Mind wanders in deep dark sea and this also wonders not finding right way sometimes. English summer day amazes mind. Finding a shady path is interesting. This is clear imagery that talks about helping self. Going in adventure with memory of God we can achieve our goal. Amazing sharing...10
Thank you Kumarmani for taking the time to read and comment on this poem.
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7/28/2025 2:38:53 PM # 1.0.0
A nice poetic imagination, Diana. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks