Tuesday, October 28, 2008

The Shadows Personality (Not One Of My Best Workes I Know) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shadow is not light nor is it dark,
it is not twilight nor is it dusk,
the shadow is an unstable thing,
easily influenced by the movement of others,
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Terry jones
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Patti Masterman 20 November 2009

I really like all the ideas in here. That's some deep thinking, which I can appreciate (since it's so hard for me to do it!) smiles, P

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o goodness, you all never give yourselves enough credit, this is a great poem, keep it up!

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Annie Girl 13 November 2008

i like this..... no matter what u do darkness lurks at every corner..... awsome work

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Michelle Valdez 13 November 2008

never run away from the shadow the shadow may be your best friend......

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Racheal 31 October 2008

i love this one it's great

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Paul Stertz 29 October 2008

There is only one part I don't like...the part where you said '(Not one of my best works) ! '...this is great! It's very deep and different. Excellent job. You are obviously talented-keep it up!

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<font color =fusha>Amy 28 October 2008

this is really good, stop doubting yourself you're a great writer: D

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