The shadow is not light nor is it dark,
it is not twilight nor is it dusk,
the shadow is an unstable thing,
easily influenced by the movement of others,
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o goodness, you all never give yourselves enough credit, this is a great poem, keep it up!
i like this..... no matter what u do darkness lurks at every corner..... awsome work
never run away from the shadow the shadow may be your best friend......
There is only one part I don't like...the part where you said '(Not one of my best works) ! '...this is great! It's very deep and different. Excellent job. You are obviously talented-keep it up!
this is really good, stop doubting yourself you're a great writer: D
I really like all the ideas in here. That's some deep thinking, which I can appreciate (since it's so hard for me to do it!) smiles, P