Monday, April 20, 2009

The Shadows Comments

Rating: ★5.0

A girl runs through the alley
Anxiously looking over her shoulder
They follow her like bees to honey
Escaping the meanacing shadows that chase her
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Claire Hunter
girl Bees
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Adrian Cordova 17 April 2010

Great detail, a superb analogy, and clearer then water.10/10

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Afzal Shauq 20 January 2010

wow so sweet and meaningful...loved it 10/10

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Killing Hope 21 April 2009

You got a nice flow in this poem, good job.

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Sue Sie 20 April 2009

Wow..this is very good...scary too...but I like the scene you have created here...well done...10+

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Joseph Poewhit 20 April 2009

Spell binding the fast action of the words

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