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Thank you good Rose Marie you are so kind and so eloquent in your comments. Take care, stay healthy and enjoy life. Any comment from a world class poetess such as you I welcome. And one of praise I treasure.
Thank you L I wrote it short and sweet for if prolonged it would then lose its message. After all it is a metaphor. Take care.
What a wonderful and powerful short write from the mind of a one of a kind Poet. Beautifully crafted.
Nice thought. I wish you had expanded a bit more on this thought. Thanks for sharing this epigram, Shaun.
Without a doubt your metaphor is so appropriate! Love this description Shaun,5 stars as always my friend Thank you for this wonderful image! Take care Lodigiana x
Lodigiana many thanks and I'm glad a gifted and highly original thinking poetess such as you enjoyed it. For I find when writing it's all about originality and using our mindset tool of imagination. Simply not thinking outside the box, but outside the box making factory. Thanks again and please simply enjoy life and all the many good things and poetry it can bestow. Shaun.x.