Among
the daisies of my morning garden,
and the golden leaves of grass that
dance untouched when the wind fills
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A fantastic poem from a yearning heart! Piyush, this is real piyush (juicy nectar I mean) although the mood is sad. But, the sweetest comes from the saddest as our poet has said. (10)
The sense of absence of the beloved felt by the lover in you is poignantly shared here! When you see the whole Nature smiling before you, you pine for her presence! Enjoyed this passionate write!
So beautiful and vivid with nature's lovely portraits. Absence of beloved felt throughout makes it a very intense piece connected with emotions and nature. Enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem.
The longing for the absent beloved is poignantly portrayed in this lovely write. Enjoyed reading it.
The beauty of nature so well portrayed and the absence so poignantly felt makes this piece profound and phenomenal.......very very well composed......10
Untouched! ! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.