Sunday, December 20, 2020

The Shadow By The Setting Sun Comments

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A shadow behind my back
I listen to the setting sun laugh

Who held this mirror opaque in front of my face?
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2020

Vision and shadow! ! ! With the reflections of the sun. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Varsha M 20 December 2020

Yes indeed. So well caught the shadowing age and shadowing sun in opacity of mirror. Thank-you.

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Bharati Nayak 20 December 2020

But these eyes are resting on my face! The mirror can't be faulty May be my vision isn't that bright The way I thought it ought to be... No blame on you, my dear sun! - - - - - -A wonderful poem

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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