Sunday, October 13, 2013

The Shadow Comments

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The Shadow just went along for the ride
It barely made judgement, it never did hide
It just followed and went where it was destined to go
Picked up belongings, watched the grass grow
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Lyn Paul
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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

Rich flow of thought embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A well drafted and elegantly composed poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Kanav Justa 02 December 2013

... the ending was fabulous... and very powerful... nice write..

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Amitava Sur 20 October 2013

Like or not - shadow will remain & we're to move managing it......... well written

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All shadows are sly so to say At night as we turn in, they slink away To their own dark affairs before it again a day And they like slaves have to accompany us again...... (good poem sir and welcome to my page)

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Poetheart Morgan 17 October 2013

Oh! We all have a dark side of the moon! ! ! ! ! That is balance in life. Goods and bad moments inside us. But we can always walk with our own shoes. Love that Poetess! ! !

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Heather Wilkins 16 October 2013

you are just a shadow until you fit your own shoe some fir at once, yet so many never do. great quote.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 15 October 2013

You are just a shadow.... Until you fit your own shoe great inspiring write, Lyn.

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Danny Draper 14 October 2013

Fine thoughts and indeed each must be true to themselves while caring for others and finding balance in life.

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Lily Mccambridge 13 October 2013

That was beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! Is this you?

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