The Shadow - 03 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Shadow - 03



Darkness is a thin line,
It's a thin line
of separation
between the two drops
of tear from
the same eyes
Who have sought
Who have been waiting
Someone as close
as the heart beat
over and again for ages
relentlessly,
Walking
On the same path,
Waiting for
by the same path,
Till all the petals
of the garden
have fallen
One after another
Till the last leaf.

Wednesday, March 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache,loneliness,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 28 March 2018

Walking On the same path, Waiting for by the same path, Till all the petals of the garden have fallen One after another Till the last leaf. Sadness of separation and waiting, well written. Thanks for the poem shared. 10+++++++++

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Thanks dear for such lovely remarks and great words of encouragement

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Rani dear, Thank you dear for this beautiful remarks and encouragement.

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Prativa Rani 28 March 2018

Walking On the same path, Waiting for by the same path, Till all the petals of the garden have fallen One after another Till the last leaf. Sadness of separation and waiting, well written. Thanks for the poem shared.

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Dear Rani, Thank you for this beautiful remarks and encouragement.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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