The Seventeen's Comments

The ever-lasting fair shadow of adolescence Treads the lawn of life painful And the sweetness of seventeen's will stay lingering lifetime after all. lovely appreciation of life's years 17 signifies IMMORTALITY Something unique happens most lose virginity Thoughtful poetry

With tear drops gliding adown on the strings Crystal clear, salty bitter, and still silent The ever-lasting fair shadow of adolescence Treads the lawn of life painful And the sweetness of seventeen's will stay lingering lifetime after all. A nicely penned poem with this lovely stanza. 10++++ for the poem. Subhas

With tear drops gliding adown on the strings Crystal clear, salty bitter, and still silent Lovely poem shared. 10+++ for it.

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Thanks so much PoemHunter's friends! Your Team is so great! I love PoemHunter!

Thanks so much PoemHunter's friends! Your Team is so great! I love PoemHunter!

i love that one it's very good very well written, and very haunting as well keep up the good work

life painful, lifetime after all, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.