Friday, July 3, 2020

The Seven Deadly Sins: (2009) Comments

Rating: 3.8

Pride

I am a mirror that reflects your ego.
I will always massage it, and tell
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Shaun Cronick 23 July 2020

An enthralling and great poem always deserves another look and then some. 10++ and I wish it was more. Simply a most captivating read.

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Dominic Windram 16 July 2020

Thanks for your generous and perceptive comments Shaun...very much appreciated! It would be great to perform this poem with costumed actors playing the parts of the 7 deadly sins.

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Shaun Cronick 11 July 2020

Every time I reread it the more poetry gold I find, as each verse dovetails so perfectly, into the next. And a deep poem to make one think. And I thank you again Dominic.

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Shaun Cronick 11 July 2020

Wow! Dominic a spectacular poem! A poem to knock any reader for six. Loved it! Each sin beautifully well-written and imagined. Your verse with the well chosen words temptress and that red dress, I would never have thought up. Your poem deserves more than just a 10 and hopefully soon selected as Poem of the Day.10++ but deserves much, much more my friend. I wish you well and keep writing your sheer poetry class and quality.

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