Saturday, August 22, 2009

The Setting Of The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walked through thousand paths merging with the dark,
heart plunged into oblivion, your scorn bearing a mark
jumped into the abyss trying to get you back
found a living wall, an unthinkable rack
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Mystique 2009
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Amber Roser 16 October 2009

Love the theme, love the language, LOVE IT! Another 10

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Aziz Alkaabi 17 September 2009

These verses blend aptly with the dark theme and dusk in which even pleading to demons and dark forces for some help can be equally shared and justified by the poet and reader. Excellent write.

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Mystique 2009

Mystique 2009

Caracas, Venezuela
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