Monday, September 4, 2017

The Serpent Comments

Rating: 5.0

the snake is in the garden patch
as beautiful as trust
but pain has entered to the world
along with hate and lust
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Barry Middleton
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Sarah Persson 05 September 2017

I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem, a very good write about both good and evil. a well deserved 10 here

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