Thursday, September 19, 2019

The Selfless One Is Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

By heavens! The selfless one, she is gone.
Brave as a lion she fought for just cause;
If courage means fearless, then she is courageous;
If today's cubs are tomorrow's lions, then she births lions.
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Michael Walker 23 January 2020

A moving sonnet to a good person, who is gone too soon.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 05 January 2020

A beautifully written, touching tribute to a caring and wonderful person. It brings to mind the song, " Abraham, Martin and John."

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A B Faniki 06 January 2020

Thank you for the kind comment it made my day and oh! The song have my name what a coincidence. Have a wounderful day

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Savita Tyagi 26 September 2019

A wonderful tribute to all the good people on earth with such a beautiful words. An excellent poem.

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A B Faniki 05 January 2020

Thank you for the wonderful comment and For taking the time to read my poem. Cheer

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2019

A poignant yet beautiful poem. Very touching. Yes, death takes all and we are sometimes caught unaware. Well thought and conveyed write.

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Mj Lemon 21 September 2019

So much raw emotion. The last two lines, so poignant. A wonderful verse, A B.

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A B Faniki 04 October 2019

Thank you for this wonderful comment and for taking the time to read my work. Cheers: -)

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A B Faniki 04 October 2019

Thank you.: -) remain blessed

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A B Faniki 04 October 2019

Yess it dose that Catch us unawareThank you and have a lovely day: -)

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A B Faniki 04 October 2019

Thank you for the the wonderful comment. Have a lovely day

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Kingsley Egbukole 19 September 2019

A beautiful poem of emotion over a loss of a dear one. Kingsley Egbukole

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