When I walked up to the house, Charlie's dad was loading boxes into the U-Haul truck. The family car was still missing.
Where's Charlie? I asked.
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Well now I really want to know what happened to Charlie! You pulled me in with these two chapters... Especially this one! Nice descriptive writing and interesting characters!
Very amazing poem you have shared here definitely. Charlie's mysterious memory and life is wisely pictured in many lines here and this is very amazing. Wonderful effort to get way of life. Wise and interesting.....10
hi Kim, i've been 'called away' from PH several times recently and tonight decided to check out some of my favorite poets in a short time. this is an 'entertaining' story. i don't know if it would qualify or not in a poetry contest, but it would make for a newpaper story in sequels for readers to look forward to. i'll try to remember to look at more of the story later; is this the last chapter, as it seems? as usual, nice photo. are you sure it isn't your wife in a fur coat? bri :)