Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, November 8, 2015

The Seer (Chapter 12) Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I walked up to the house, Charlie's dad was loading boxes into the U-Haul truck. The family car was still missing.

Where's Charlie? I asked.
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Bri Edwards 11 November 2015

hi Kim, i've been 'called away' from PH several times recently and tonight decided to check out some of my favorite poets in a short time. this is an 'entertaining' story. i don't know if it would qualify or not in a poetry contest, but it would make for a newpaper story in sequels for readers to look forward to. i'll try to remember to look at more of the story later; is this the last chapter, as it seems? as usual, nice photo. are you sure it isn't your wife in a fur coat? bri :)

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Pamela Sinicrope 10 November 2015

Well now I really want to know what happened to Charlie! You pulled me in with these two chapters... Especially this one! Nice descriptive writing and interesting characters!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2015

Very amazing poem you have shared here definitely. Charlie's mysterious memory and life is wisely pictured in many lines here and this is very amazing. Wonderful effort to get way of life. Wise and interesting.....10

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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