Sunday, May 17, 2009

The Seeker Comments

Rating: 4.5

In the womb as a germ of humanity
I sought life to begin with
And to grow – to grow as a human
Later… much later
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Bhaswat Chakraborty
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Raj Nandy 07 September 2009

I FULLY AGREE! LET US BE SEEKERS OF TRUTH AND LIGHT! BUT BEFORE EVERY OTHER THING, LET US FIRST LEARN TO BE GOOD HUMAN BEINGS! That is what I told some ladies here who are engrossed in weekly 'Kirtans'! Either my message is not understood, or they donot understand it is for their good! For your poem 10 + -Raj

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Sameer Ahmed 29 July 2009

Jalalad - Din - Rumi once said: '' Your task is to seek and find the barriers inside yourself that your are built against it ''. A very thought provoking poem reflecting the importance of recognization of humanity and making it relevant to our own lives for without this we would be simply live sculpts devoid of the life's experiences. So seeking for something worthy should always be the motivation in terms of humanity.

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Hari Khabrani 23 May 2009

Dear Poet, The seeker sent you in womb as examining your ability, capacity and endeavour to be human and your job towards humanity. How you attained and fulfill your assignments. Share & read poem what the seeker demands from you?

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Ency Bearis 23 May 2009

an impressive diction in poetic creativity...well done...10

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Carol Gall 23 May 2009

life in tough good write

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 May 2009

An excellent work,10++ with pleasure.

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Kranthi Pothineni 22 May 2009

Last two lines explains it all. Life is always hard but tough get going. Good one.

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Louis Rams 21 May 2009

from birth to death, the journey is tough and that is the human side of us. we are not like the wild beast for knowledge is what we seek. gr8t write

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Bob Blackwell 21 May 2009

Most pain comes from what has past or fear of future thoughts. If we deal with each moment as they come and then detach, our pain is less and our joy is more. But like you said Life is a journey through which we all must go. Great poem.

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Subroto Chatterjee 21 May 2009

'...........The pain of being is very high, To seek to be a human...' What makes you say this? But then again, some people do make life complicated quite easily...! ! As they say, it takes all types... Cheers. Subroto

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Joseph Poewhit 20 May 2009

GOOD or EVIL those are the paths out forth by GOD for life's trying fire.

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 May 2009

'Who am I, what are my needs? Who is my friend and Who is the foe? What are my rewards and why are my reprimands? Who grows and who remains unchanged? ' hey these are the questions we asks from ourselves everyday...we are seekers indeed...i always ask why do we live? ...can we realy find answers? ...most times we stay as seekers till we die..thanks for the words of wisdom friend..10++

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