Friday, March 29, 2019

The Seed Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds thunder, roar aloud when I arrive,
Life all around on earth hails me full heart,
And rainbows paint when I set to depart.
It's not me alone still that earth's alive,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Prabir Gayen 29 March 2019

Beautiful poem dear poet...... thanks///////////////

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 March 2019

Thank you Prabir Gaye, but thank this creation waiting to be born one August day when rains and monsoon was in a receding mode, and I thought about the seed of life.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 March 2019

Genesis of the germination of seed of life as also the marvels of nature accompanying the magic have been beautifully elaborated through a wonderful flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 March 2019

Yes, we rejoice when it rains, and don't spare the joy for the so-called rainy day. Is not it? Thank you Ratnakar Mandlik.

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