Saturday, June 11, 2016

The Seed Comments

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I sow a seed
The land was fertile and well cultivated
The soil looked rich and good
The weather looked favourable
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LINET SABASTIAN
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 August 2016

this is a symbolic poem on expectations in life which did not come true. but your last lines denote that you are not frustrated and with determinations you are going to plant again.... soooooo nice. thank you

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 July 2016

'But it never germinated'! Nice piece of work.

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