Tuesday, June 20, 2006

The Seductress Comments

Rating: 5.0

She will hold you by the hand
and gaze into your eyes
she'll laugh at every thing you say
you feel she understands
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Charles M Moore
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Will Barber 02 July 2006

A perfect vision of Aphrodite's power. The combination of sensuality and humor - and insight - just amazing. Very well versified. An exceptional work.

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***** ********* 21 June 2006

Oh yes Charles! Forever and a day! lol Perfect seductress poem. I love the line about pulling the dress down, she's shy really! Grinning at you Tai

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Linda Ori 20 June 2006

Sigh........Some women have all the right moves. Guess I forgot to put in my order upstairs. Pretty graphic, tantalizing. Wondering when you'll write the sequel? Linda

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Jennifer Woodland 20 June 2006

Wonderful Job! ! ! ! It felt like I was there in the corner watching this woman work her magic...

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Patricia Gale 20 June 2006

Ok Charles you need to stay out of my diary...lol... only kidding! Splendid read into the way a woman can capture what she wants. Patricia

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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