The Seductress Comments

I prefer universal education rather then university education. Well narrated.

As always you kept me interested through out sir.. Very nice to read.. You do have your own style too.. I mean, not many write poems like this. I liked the message too, yeah these things can happen.. You know some Sri Lankan girls committed suicide, after prefects found some explicit content in their phones.. Sri Lankan society, is kind of conventional. Women are confined to certain norms... so prefects found those things.. and the girl committed suicide, cause she found it hard to face her parents... Hey that is a different story all together, lots of buzz about that affair these days.. I mean if such a thing happened here in S.L, I have no idea what could happen to the girl.. as for your poem, it is great as always, extremely readable and as always kept me engrossed through out..10+++ cheers// Shan

I really believe in the wise words spoken.... He who has never sin, may cast the first stone. Loved the last line of...He got his education. The education really says it all. The boy becomes a man, perhaps a little quickly. Does he follow his heart or listen to the criticism of others. Because she is the older one, society knocks her down once again... The first time she may had felt true happiness. Definitly a fine line in life and a great debater. My honest thought about it, is. If they are truly happy with each other then it's no one else busness, but then that's not the way life works Thanks for the brain tease louis

Truth is that this happens. There is such a fine line in life. Things happen and life changes forever. This poems starts out in one way and then takes a turn to another. Nice writing to do this. Surprising poetry has a hook that takes the reader on a ride. Nice job. DC

Such thing happens in life between man and the one he chooses to wife But my say is that sin is sin the age didnt matter, but its the fact they sin That really angered God and to me, nothign matters, but the say of God.

fatal attraction...some should not be expressed