Wednesday, November 29, 2017

The Secrets Of A Summer Night (Gibside - August 2017) Comments

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When at last the diurnal light dies
And the skewed, spectral shadows lengthen,
Slowly a profound stillness arrives
Cloaked in a velvet gown. Birds settle
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Tamara Beryl Latham 14 September 2019

Bravi! An excellent write that leaves this reader spellbound. Your language is fresh and the lines flow into one and other flawlessly. : -)

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Dominic Windram 14 September 2019

Thanks Tamara...much appreciated. This particular poem was published recently in the 2019 Spring issue of October Hill magazine...under a more apt title for that time of year: The Secret's of A Late Spring's Night.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 October 2018

Slowly a profound stillness arrives Cloaked in a velvet gown.Birds settle In their nests of twigs and thistledown. And flowers close their precious petals.... lullabies of sound: dreams are woven....... a fine poem is always an enjoyment for the soul......... your poem is like that......... a great poem.. tony

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Dominic Windram 08 October 2018

Thanks Tony much appreciated!

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