Sunday, August 5, 2007

The Secret Unknown Of Keeping Secrets Comments

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It’s like stretch marks of a balloon filled with too much air
Threatening to pop at any second
A pop so loud that everyone jumps and kids scream
The fragile thin rubber balloon stretched as far as it can
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Jennifer Unknown
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Susan Bagley 31 August 2007

Jennifer, This is very powerful. I like it. I can identify with it and your analogies are wonderful, chosen with depth unusual for one so young. You must keep writing and never stop. Susan

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