Wednesday, November 13, 2013

The Secret Sorrows Of Those Who Do Not Sleep Comments

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Oh the secret sorrows of those who dare not sleep
Reliving all their sorrows in dark of night
Over truths unspoken, oh how they weep
As the deep dark overtakes their sight
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Tim Vallie
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 November 2013

Crafted in a fantastic style n rhymin! Its better to vent out d sorrows before those who wud care. Kudos poet. I hope u review my latest poem too.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 November 2013

beautiful poem, especially loved the last 4 lines.

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Tim Vallie

Tim Vallie

Duluth Minnesota
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