Monday, March 5, 2012

The Secret Potato Comments

Rating: 4.8

Theres a potato on my head!
Yes, a potato, that's what I said
Its big and fat and borwn and round
and covered in dirt from growing in the ground
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Ashley Bachtel
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Alfred Middleton 26 February 2024

I read this in a poetry Competition at my school and won, love it!

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Kevin Patrick 08 March 2012

This was really funny I enjoyed every line, thanks for the write

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Tom Higgins 05 March 2012

Nice thought! Nice pun, well written verse, I like this a lot.

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Ashley Bachtel

Ashley Bachtel

Canton, Ohio
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