Saturday, March 24, 2018

The Secret Comments

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can i tell you a secret?
i'm not supposed to tell
a secret all about you
that pertains to me as well
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Robert Smith
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Bri Edwards 22 September 2019

In: " can honesty be truly best" , it seems like SOMETHING is missing in or near this line to explain better (for me) the use of " best" . so, are the last two lines " the secret truth(s) " , i wonder. that's my guess. if so, it is NO LONGER a secret, at least not one only known by one. bri :)

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Nudershada Cabanes 24 March 2018

A lovely poem well executed with a wonderful rhyme.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

You are amazing. Secret truths are knowledge. Love and beauty carry attraction. An amazing poem is wisely penned...10

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