Thursday, March 12, 2015

The Secret Comments

Rating: 5.0

Handsomer men of better height wonder
Where the secret of my irresistible charm lies;
They do not believe it when I enter the pub
And push all the dazzling girls to their highs.
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Hannington Mumo
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Nel Omofolarin 13 September 2022

Wao...! Amazing piece!

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anais vionet 20 November 2021

I liked your brag of a poem =]

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Julia Luber 12 September 2019

I hope I've learned some of your tricks and methods through reading your poem.

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A B Faniki 09 August 2019

Intrestint***

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A B Faniki 09 August 2019

Intreting ballad tint with humour. Thanks for sharing

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 January 2019

What superb write! You're no tinkerer you say you are. Kudos.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2018

I tell them it’s because I look so caring, It’s because I don’t force my egotistic way, It’s because I listen to their every word And because I read their moods every day........it is the simplest things that attract...... it is so true in life my dear poet. thank u for presenting this theme here. tony

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Elena Plotkin 12 November 2015

Brilliant poem. The secret is no longer a secret, Your charm exudes in your writing just as it does in your calculated walk, natural smile, and honeyed talk. Handsomer Men of better height have much to fear.10+

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Hazel Durham 19 July 2015

I love this superb write with your charms beautifully penned, original and with a great swagger! !

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Aaron Wambu 29 June 2015

men oh men! Awesome piece!

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Soul Watcher 19 March 2015

Nice words, you nailed it. Thank you for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 March 2015

Nice work. With the muse of what is seen in the world around us today. E.K.L.

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