Monday, May 6, 2013

The Secret Comments

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There are some words stuck in my mouth.
Those words are not very old,
But still enough to keep me wondering
When I'll be brave? When I'll be brave?
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Ketan Hukare
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Thomas Yarborough 08 May 2013

Nice sentiment...Question: is the fifth word in the 12th line supposed to be heat or heart? For some reason I kept thinking heart was the optimum word there.

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