Friday, May 7, 2010

The Secret Comments

Rating: 4.8

As deep as the ocean's dept,

As deep as this secret I kept,
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Erick Puma
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Veronica Solis 21 June 2010

This is really good...It's like you're saying its a huge secret but you will not spill. Very nice! :)

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Crazy Vampire 01 June 2010

really good...i liked it!

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Noel Horlanda 16 May 2010

Good theme, nicely written, perfect rhymes. I know your secret...you're in love. Is this your first? Keep writing...see you then.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 May 2010

that's love and its secret well locked inside the heart-boat...nicely worded...good piece...10

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