As deep as the ocean's dept,
As deep as this secret I kept,
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Good theme, nicely written, perfect rhymes. I know your secret...you're in love. Is this your first? Keep writing...see you then.
that's love and its secret well locked inside the heart-boat...nicely worded...good piece...10
This is really good...It's like you're saying its a huge secret but you will not spill. Very nice! :)