Friday, June 25, 2010

The Secret Comments

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It carried like
A whisper in the breeze
I watched it float delicately
As it rose above my head
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Saadat Tahir 10 July 2010

the perniciousness of the whispered word and the fall out verty well written A whisper in the breeze I watched it float delicately initially it seem almost feather light...but let the ship pick up speed...and what it becomes.... such an important area of human inetraction thanx and cheers

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 June 2010

oh very interestingly narrated the path of secrecy that slowly gets light by whispers in hide, quite ingenious write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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