Friday, March 19, 2010

The Second Motel I Passed Comments

Rating: 5.0

-room one
Occupied.
Do not disturb.
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Timothy Venard
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Diamond Williams 22 May 2010

I like it....its like a mystery thats showing wats realy goin on behin close doors

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you are writing about the way people are abused and don't speak about it. eventually it is goign to kill them.. emotionally or physically.. you good a good job.. a well done poem

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