Tuesday, January 4, 2005

The Second Day Comments

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I miss you.
Like the flowers miss the morning dew.
Like the night sky miss the dawn's blue.
Like the desert sands miss November rain.
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Warren Augustus de Guzman
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Herbert Nehrlich1 04 January 2005

Not original enough. You can do better by really trying to impress HER with the poem's versatility Hope you don't mind my words. Meant well. H

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