Thursday, January 12, 2006

The Seasons, With Sparrows Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know the sparrow in the marrow
of your bones.
And in the spring, closely within
your pirouettes I follow
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Martin A. Ramos
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Patricia Gale 13 March 2006

Wonderful rhyme, use of nature very nice. Patricia

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Hugh Cobb 13 January 2006

A fine love poem, Martin. There is a classic feel to it, very Yeatsian. The subtlety of the rhyme scheme enhances the piece. Fine work. Hugh

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Martin A. Ramos

Martin A. Ramos

Mayagüez, PR
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