Tuesday, September 3, 2013

The Seasons Of Life (Revised) Comments

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A weaver sits among
the beautiful threads
weaving a glorious
tapestry
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Heather Burns
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Shahzia Batool 04 September 2013

this poem is a painting, indeed...each stanza is a fine example of a perfect enjambement...nice work of course! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 September 2013

Lovely poem with different colours of seasons picturised very well.. Loved reading it twice, Heather....

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Deepak Sawhney 04 September 2013

Really enjoyed reading your perspective. Like the carefully interwoven threads & the colours of life's tapestry. Beautifully chosen words.

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Noreen Carden 04 September 2013

Hi Heather a lovely poem speaking as someone in the winter of life winter has a great deal to offer well done a lovely read

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Tribhawan Kaul 04 September 2013

A beautiful poem woven with words bring various shades of life.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 September 2013

And the Master Weaver weaves the tapestry of life. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 03 September 2013

A really beautiful poem, a wonderful write.

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