Wednesday, May 7, 2014

The Seasons Comments

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Spring clothes the Earth in silk of green
And parades her in a rare sheen
Summer gifts the plants with bloom
And causes the bees to hum and zoom
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2018

There are six seasons and each season has special getup. Spring clothes the Earth in green silk. Summer gifts the plants with bloom and causes the bees to hum and zoom. Autumn changes the color of leaves into yellow. Winter brings ice, snow and cold wind. Nice expression. Beautiful poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 06 November 2015

my seasons here are only hot and wet add in the haze and it makes us fret thanks Valsa-10

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Amitava Sur 28 May 2014

A lovely picture post with all the seasons in it, drawn neatly in the poem

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Vivek Tiwari 26 May 2014

Small but sweet and melodious including the beauty of the seasons their charm and delicacy...

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Akhtar Jawad 26 May 2014

A lovely, really lovely poem. I don't know whether you understand Bhojpuri or not. I have heard from my elders- Hathia mein hath god, chitra mein phool....Charhe sewati jhappa jhool.

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Paul Sebastian 15 May 2014

Great write! ! A beautiful salutation to the seasons! ! I enjoyed it!

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The seasons with different characters represent the whole being of the universe in some philosophical context and it is good expression I think.

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Dinesan Madathil 14 May 2014

Seasons portrayed in the limelight of human life in compromise with conflicts innumerable have much to reveal before us. Madam, you have woven a filament of a bright season.

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Nature poems are always as wonderful as ever like a thing of beauty is a joy for ever............Valsa.............seasons very superbly depicted.......

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Hazel Durham 09 May 2014

A vivid picture of the seasons is captured with beautiful imagery! I love this superb write!

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Om Chawla 09 May 2014

Pithy and yet captures the true spirit of seasons. Liked it.

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Tajudeen Shah 09 May 2014

You have considered only four seasons, whereas, we, in India, have six behaviour patterns to our nature, it seems. smile. well, very cute, beautiful and very much impulsive the driven force towards loving, caring, enjoying, rather engaging in nature beyond all the confusions of the complex life course. wonderfully penned. Thank you very much.

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Kee Thampi 09 May 2014

poetess with a beautiful pictures of loving nature And parades her in a rare sheen

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Salini Nair 08 May 2014

poem of all seasons...like it

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And seeing these seasons come and eventually go We pass from youth to old age and its faded glow With few joys and too many regrets on the open page Of that diary that God once gifted us to keep and update.......... Simple but evocative poem on the transitory nature of life.

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All seasons are covered in a short and sweet poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 08 May 2014

concisely compressed into few words, the seasons' essence.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 07 May 2014

Good strong writing! Excellent poem!

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Colleen Courtney 07 May 2014

I adore this sweet poem. I'm a huge fan of seasonal poetry and you've pegged each season so perfectly! Well done!

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Gajanan Mishra 07 May 2014

icy winds that blow and blow, wonderful Valsa, I love it. Please read my new poems and say something.

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