Tuesday, June 4, 2013

The Seasons.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am sandwiched between two giants,
Who have extremely fierce and calm clime,
The pores are closed when one is around,
The pores sprout as the sprinklers to create pond,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

this is a beautifully written poem. with great imagery.

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Valsa George 05 June 2013

The pores are closed when one is around, The pores sprout as the sprinklers to create pond Summer and winter are beautifully described! Enjoyed! !

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Wahab Abdul 05 June 2013

i see you are picking up and you going up and up... a weighty write.....10 marks

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