People change with every season
Straying and punishing hard
Turning an innocent little gesture
Into an astonishing discover
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Well I was very impressed with the way you communicated your message. You know, communication is what this is all about. That's what I tell everyone. I'd like to see every poem rhyme. But honestly, as long as they transmit a message to the reader; particularly one like this. I couldn't care less. Well, well done. I applaud your message particularly. GW62
Lillian nice poem I enjoyed it