Saturday, September 3, 2016

The Search Comments

Rating: 5.0

With all the pain within me,
I will try to write my soul,
No, it isn't very easy,
Melancholic rivers, flow.
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Sandra Feldman
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Kelly Kurt 03 September 2016

It seems almost impossible, but love often leads to more pain than pleasure. Writing can never fully describe either extreme, but can be therapeutic in its attempt.

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Susan Williams 03 September 2016

Trying to write your soul- - - -that is so beautifully said. You have a way of saying your thoughts that your readers find themselves pausing to savor. This search you are on- -I hate to hear it is one of melancholy. Yet how can we find the hidden truths of life if we aren't out there searching and coming up empty and searching again in a different location, using a different tool, and in a different light. Another intriguing write, Sandra.10

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