Wednesday, August 2, 2006

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Whisper.
In this dark,
in this light,
you
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Oliver Roberts
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John Kay 02 August 2006

Oliver...I love the way you seem to thread yourself through the images-very clever at times, but I'm not sure that clipped lining is effective-it was bothering me as I moved down the poem. Take care, John

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