The Search Comments

A great philosophic poem. We try to search the truth sitting on the center and we are confined in a circle. If we manage to press the circle and reform it in an ellipse the center will split in the two foci and we know that an ellipse is the locus of a point that moves so that sum of its distances from two fixed points remains always the same. Ellipse of thinking balances our thoughts. I have tried to explain it in my poem - An Ellipse and a Circle..............10

beautiful and touching in life we are always searching for something

It's a bad place to be Hazel, searching for the truth. Been there myself. Another heartfelt piece of writing. Well done.

I am searching your page and I know I have read these words before. Yet again I have read this beautiful write finding pure beauty in these words over and over again. Amazing Hazel just what you give.

We all are searching around may be our choices be different. A profound write. It is natural a beautiful poem will always sprout from a beautiful heart.

We are all seekers.... we search for something that gives meaning and purpose to our lives. Often it is like running after a mirage... the nearer we reach to have it in our hold, it slips away and stays ever elusive. The shooting star represents your restless spirit and the bottom of the sea- the unfathomable mysteries of life.... Very powerful images, Hazel!

Hazel, Hazel, I think your 1/2 Crazel and I like it! !

May this search end in a happy phase of sweet encounters and togetherness, Hazel. A fine poem to read and read...

A sea swell of a such that is full of feigns and pregnant with passion. Well done my friend!

So beautiful Hazel, captivating and makes you read it over and over again. let me know when your book is ready to purchase it will be so worth reading.

lovely- realize the truth and acclimatize with it

Lovely Hazel - very eloquent, love the closing lines.

This poem of yours is incredible...I loved it...

Searching relentlessly for the reality, Of you and me! ................ ............A passionate write, instills a sense of restlessness, the urge to find the answer, an urge to find end to this search, a lovely write dear Hazel