The Search Comments

There is an all-pervasive sense of sadness right througout this poem which would ordinarily sideline a reader. The use of classic methaphor linked with History however keeps the theme fresh to the end. Congratulations. Rgds, Ivan

I noted the poignance and sadness.. 'Make a choice and think again How many lives we will be wasting.. For an endless search and then be broken.' Very apt.. Good work.. keep it up.

Nice one! It creates an atmosphere of melancholy and world weariness