Thursday, October 29, 2009

The Seagull Comments

Rating: 4.7

Sitting on a beach,
Breathing fresh air
My only company is loneliness
It looks me in the eyes, it always has been there
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Sherri Coulter 01 December 2009

my only company is loneliness.........I could not have guessed. : (lovely.....sherri

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

I don't know how it came about, but for some reason this poem reminds me that we have to know somebody loves us for ourselves, before we can love ourselves, and be comfortable (even when all alone) with ourselves; only then can we detach enough from our neediness to be able to be fully present in our surroundings; at ease with ourselves, and then let the things around us teach us; speak to us; the sand and the beach and the ocean and the waves; and yes, even gulls can teach us a thing or two. I love this great writing. Glad to have met you here.

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Rachel Butler 30 October 2009

'The sky to reign The water that feeds him And a pair of wings to be free' Rachel Ann Butler

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