Monday, February 6, 2006

The Sea Salt Air Comments

Rating: 4.0

In caribbean breezes
the sea salt air
stings her nostrals
and the sand
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Genevieve Surrender
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William Jackson 07 February 2006

Once again you have impressed me with the change of direction in the poem. I always enjoy how I can actually feel your words, a feast for the senses.

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Genevieve Surrender

Genevieve Surrender

Columbus, OH
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