The Sea Pebbles Comments

A lovely Haiku! Thank you for sharing!

So much beauty beyond what we see if we just stop to think a little more deeply! .. Such a truly awesome poem! ..

Beautifully crafted with such beautiful heart and imagery! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++

Simply wonderful.....thank u, dear poetess..

stranded shore of sea The exhibition center pebbles with setting sun

An Eternal Tide Beach Memory In My Mind scattered pebbles white foam wave washed still tide surge sweep in upon sandy shore upon an eternal tide beach memory in my mind Inspired by the poem 'The Sea Pebbles' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin. Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

scattered pebbles white foam wave washed, still tide surge sweep in upon sandy shore, upon an eternal tide beach memory in my mind

Yes, the shiny pebbles which were once sharp edged stones got worn and smoothed by the rolling and unrolling waves and being thrown back and forth by their merciless hands. Now they have become jewels....! Beautiful haiku, Rose Marie!

This brilliant brevity, this fascinating haiku goes of course to MyPoemsList Thank you so much for creating and sharing. God's Blessings!

2) a brilliant haiku, my poetfriend, the great poetess is the only one a Master in this format, I recko A 10+++++The + are spontaneously done. I have read this loveliest haiku more than once and I want to read more and longest. Dear poet friend, this brilliant haiku is crystal clear, cutest, composed carefully and the haiku is cherished deeply by me. Thank you so very much, great poetess!

Such an amazing brevity, a haiku full of shintillating marbles, not just ordinary, but specialities, small glstening gems, but they are gems for sure. They are jewels of the sea, I just returned from up there, mine is called Normandy in French west coastal beach, WOW! I can humm all night at this haiku you so fascinatingly created. A brevity is not the easiest to write, You ought to have cropped your broad mind into the smallest and there in the end comes up a gem,

Your beautiful imagery portrays the endless action of sun and sea, in whitening the shore.

Yes, the pebbles of the sea really adorn the shore..10

Short and sweet. Beautiful ink. Thanks.

Great short work.........thank u, dear poetess.....anjandev roy.

scattered pebbles the jewels. fine picture.. tony

for " short and sweet" , this is a very nice poem. i prefer a poem with a little more 'meat' on the 'bones', but..........i'm kinda busy and limited on PC these days, so....i give you a few extra points for brevity. to MyPoemList bri :)

White shore! ! ! ! With the jewels of the sea! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Jewels of the sea! I love that line! Thanks for your lovely comments on my poem " Today I danced" .

A well executed brilliant piece. Truly awesome....10++