Saturday, August 5, 2006

The Sea Of Grey Comments

Rating: 3.5

I saw them there, a sea of grey, a sullen group of people gathered at the bay.
Nothing to say, as their mood reflected off the deep grey sea.
Their faces sad-stricken with grief, looking glum, standing on the reef.
A silence surronding the air, with just the rustle of the leaves. No more
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Nalini Hebbar 05 August 2006

a lovely story...looked long but read very well indeed...sad but these things do happen...could you just shorten it a bit...or rather compact it...you could maybe divide it into two parts...love...nalini

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success